These examples will show you a little variety. "How to Begin a
Paper in Art History" will give you an example of one with a little
narrative text mixed in. Many of the others are just boring lists of
titles with call numbers - I think those would be fine for a scholar but
would they spark a child's interest in reading?
A 5th grade pathfinder on 'Ancient Egypt':
Major snore man!
A Waterloo Public Library Genealogy pathfinder:
Not too bad. Still in the list of books & sources mode...doesn't
annotate these things?